CHAPTER 2 - CREATING THE PERFECT EBAY AD
THE TITLE GETS YOU NOTICED
Ok, you’ve been to the auction web site, and you’ve taken
a look around. It’s a lot like looking the classified section of a newspaper,
except for the fact that you have to click on the title to see the rest of the
ad. It can be a very confusing task to find exactly what you are looking for. It
is a virtual maze as you try to weed out just the items, that you are looking
for. There’s so many items, that the information overload makes you want to
scream! It’s your job as a seller to help your prospective bidder cut through
the red tape, and get your ad viewed by as many people as you can! There are a
few ways to do this, so let’s get to it!
Like I just said in the last paragraph, in order for someone
to see your ad, they have to go through the trouble to take their mouse, put it
over your title and click on it! If they do not do this one thing, I do not care
how good your item is, and I do not care how good your ad is, the simply reality
is you are not going to sell a darn thing to them! Therefore, one of the most
important things that you will do is create a title for your ad.
USE RELEVANT WORDS IN YOUR TITLE
The thing that I feel is the MOST IMPORTANT when coming up
with your title is to include the relevant words. Ok, this sounds really stupid,
but you would be surprised at the amount of titles that tell you ABSOLUTELY
NOTHING. You must be extremely specific in your titles about exactly what you
are selling. If you have an autographed Frank Sinatra photo, don’t use the
title "Frank Sinatra." I don’t care if it is in the autograph
section of the web site, this is not descriptive enough, and a lot of people may
miss your ad. Use something more like "RARE Frank Sinatra AUTOGRAGHED
LP" and you will be amazed at the difference in the amount of bids you will
get.
Remember that a lot of people will use the search feature to
find the items that they are looking for, and make sure you include the words
that they are most likely to search for in your title! I’m a big NASCAR racing
fan and absolutely love to purchase die-cast model cars over the Internet. If I
am searching for the different paint schemes used by a particular driver, they
had better have the driver's name in the title, or I am going to miss it! So
remember, think about what your buyer is searching for, and give it to them in
the title!
USE WORDS THAT WILL GRAB THE BUYERS ATTENTION
The other thing you want to do in the title is use words that
will GRAB the attention of the buyer. After all, they have literally thousands
and thousands of titles to look at, and you want them to take a closer look at
yours. How do you get their attention?
First, you can pay the small extra fee, which is $2.00 at the
time this is being written, to get your title listed in a bold face font. This
is an easy way to set your ad apart from the rest of the ads that are out there.
And while the bold face is a quick and easy way to get more attention, I don’t
believe that it is always the best way. The best thing, along with being
descriptive, is using POWER WORDS.
What are power words? They’re things that you can use to add
a sense of urgency to your items. Words such as RARE, LIMITED EDITION,
UNIQUE, ONE-OF-A-KIND, BEAUTIFUL, will help you get attention. Other words
like GREAT, UNBELIEVABLE, STUNNING, AWESOME will also help get your buyer
to notice what you are selling.
Look at these two titles:
Bruce Springsteen Autograph
"RARE SPRINGSTEEN AUTOGRAPHED GUITAR-AWESOME!"
Ok which one grabs your attention? I’d say that 98% of you
said that the second title did, the other 2% of you need to take another look!
There are a few things going on in the second title, the most noticeable is that
the whole thing is using capital letters. Now, this is a great way to make your
items stand out, but sometimes it can be overdone. Occasionally it can take away
from the emphasis on what you want the buyer to see. Take a look at this title:
"RARE SPRINGSTEEN Autographed GUITAR Awesome!"
This can also be a very effective title. The buyer will see
what is the most important in the title first, which is "Springsteen
Guitar." Remember no matter how you use capitals and lower case letters,
you want your title to stand out from the rest.
Many sellers like to use characters in their title, things
like @, #, $, %, etc. to draw extra attention. Sometimes they look cheesy, and
sometimes they work. That all depends on the product, and the type of buyer that
you are trying to attract. Try a few different things and see what is most
effective. Keep records on how well each individual ad title is received, and
use the style that is most successful!
Remember, when it comes to the title: be descriptive, use
exciting, attention grabbing words, and set your ad apart from the rest!
WRITING DESCRIPTIONS THAT SELL
Once you’ve gotten someone to take a look at your ad; you
want him or her to bid on the item you are offering! You need to make your
product look as appealing as possible and you want to motivate the person to
place a bid immediately. After all, if the person leaves without placing a bid,
there’s a good chance that they will not be back.
BE SPECIFIC
There are a few things that are important in the ad itself.
The first is the overall description of what you are selling. BE SPECIFIC. This
is the most important thing in your description. Do not leave any room for error
on what is for sale. Get as graphic and specific as you can to describe your
item. If there is anything special about the item, list it. List any special
features of the item. People do not feel comfortable bidding on something of
which they are not 100% sure.
LIST ANY IMPERFECTIONS THAT THE ITEM HAS
If there are any flaws in the item, like a dent or scratch,
you have to list that when you are selling the item to protect yourself. As long
as you are 100% specific on what you are selling, you will save yourself a lot
of time and hassle if someone decides to return the product to you because they
were not aware of a defect.
Even if you are using a picture in your ad, and we do highly
recommend using one, write your description for an ad without a picture. That
way the picture can be there to totally reinforce what you are selling, but will
not rely on the photo.
Once you have written an accurate and honest description of
the item, add your own creative touch. Again, use wording that will motivate the
buyer to bid on your item. If the item is difficult to find, use words like
rare, one of a kind, and unique. If it’s brand new in a box, let the buyer
know that. Include things that may seem obvious to you, because the potential
buyer may not be aware. This helps the buyer feel more comfortable in dealing
with you.
BE CREATIVE
When writing your ad you want to paint pictures with your
words. Use adjectives like great, awesome, beautiful, etc. to describe your
item. Paint a visual picture that makes your item irresistible! Tell a story
with the item if you can. Explain what the item is, and what it can do for the
buyer. If you are selling a cute little teddy bear, play it up. Put something in
the ad about the bear looking for a good new home, and some new friends to play
with. Not only will the buyer get a kick out of the ad, they will be more likely
to bid on the item if it is something that they are looking for. Going along
with the theory that people do not want to bid on something that they are not
100% sure of, people are much more likely to bid on an item if they like the
person that is selling the item. While it certainly is not easy to convey your
personality through an eBay ad, it does not hurt to try!
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